The World of the Others Commentary
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antishurtugal_reborn Because nothing is happening in this story, the author decides to coddle her Mary Sue, as well as introduce some foreshadowing as to what's going to happen far later in the novel. Not only that, but the bad guys finally start doing bad guy things. Sort of.
( Set Us Up The Bomb )
( Set Us Up The Bomb )
The World of the Others Commentary
Oct. 2nd, 2025 05:25 pmmara_dienne459 posting in antishurtugal_rebornIn which the author cockblocks her bad guys from actually doing anything interesting while simultaneously showing off her Sue's Sue-per powers. And Simon is a creep, as usual.
( So Much Build Up But No Payoff )
( So Much Build Up But No Payoff )
The Scrolls of the Ancients: Chapter Fifty-Nine and Chapter Sixty
Sep. 29th, 2025 06:39 ammasterghandalf posting in antishurtugal_rebornMG’s Announcement: As my sporkings for Scrolls of the Ancients and Fellowship of the King will both be ending soon, I’ve put up a poll for what sporks I should do next over on my journal. Please check it out and do vote if that at all interests you!
Warning: This post contains an extremely unpleasant death scene.
( In which we start slowly making preparations for the story's final act. )
Warning: This post contains an extremely unpleasant death scene.
( In which we start slowly making preparations for the story's final act. )
