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antishurtugal_reborn2025-10-06 02:36 pm
mara_dienne459) wrote in antishurtugal_reborn2025-10-06 02:36 pmEntry tags:
The World of the Others Commentary
Because nothing is happening in this story, the author decides to coddle her Mary Sue, as well as introduce some foreshadowing as to what's going to happen far later in the novel. Not only that, but the bad guys finally start doing bad guy things. Sort of.
( Set Us Up The Bomb )
( Set Us Up The Bomb )
mara_dienne459 (mara_dienne459) wrote in antishurtugal_reborn2025-10-02 05:25 pm
mara_dienne459) wrote in antishurtugal_reborn2025-10-02 05:25 pmEntry tags:
The World of the Others Commentary
In which the author cockblocks her bad guys from actually doing anything interesting while simultaneously showing off her Sue's Sue-per powers. And Simon is a creep, as usual.
( So Much Build Up But No Payoff )
( So Much Build Up But No Payoff )
masterghandalf (masterghandalf) wrote in antishurtugal_reborn2025-09-29 06:39 am
masterghandalf) wrote in antishurtugal_reborn2025-09-29 06:39 amEntry tags:
The Scrolls of the Ancients: Chapter Fifty-Nine and Chapter Sixty
MG’s Announcement: As my sporkings for Scrolls of the Ancients and Fellowship of the King will both be ending soon, I’ve put up a poll for what sporks I should do next over on my journal. Please check it out and do vote if that at all interests you!
Warning: This post contains an extremely unpleasant death scene.
( In which we start slowly making preparations for the story's final act. )
Warning: This post contains an extremely unpleasant death scene.
( In which we start slowly making preparations for the story's final act. )
